Thursday, April 30, 2009

COMPOSITION QUESTION

You walked out of the court as a free man... but nothing can erase the memories of that fateful night. If you can turn back the time, you will never ever want to drive again.

Based on the above situation, write a story of about 200 words. You may use the points below to guide you:
  • What had happened
  • Who were involved
  • What happened in the end

Please brainstorm some good phrases that can be used in the above situation and share with your peers in the 'comments' section. By the way, do you know what the above situation is about?

Will it be possible to end the essay with a proverb that you have learnt? Or at least use one proverb in the essay? :)

Rgds,
Spoilt Recorder

6 comments:

  1. Words that can be used:
    1)My car veered dangerously round a corner
    2)mount a kerb
    3)shards of glass lay scattered all over the road
    4)The impact of the collision flung me out of my seat.
    5)The police managed to appeal an eyewitness to the accident to come forward with some informations.
    6)I hugged myself with joy after knowing that I did not did anything porpuslely in the accident and that the judge had finally close the case.

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  3. Words that can be used:
    •The darkest hour comes before dawn
    •They did not have enough evidence to charge me for knocking down the lady as it was not completely my fault.
    •Look before I leap
    •Fined for drink driving

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  4. Words that can be used:

    1.Out of the blue
    2.tears streamed down from my swollen eyes
    3.slammed the brakes
    4.vision became blur

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  5. Words that can be used:
    1:Memory forever etched in my mind
    2:Driving home in my pimped out car late in the night
    3:Drifted around a impressive u-bend turn
    4:Collided with a motorcycle
    5:Flaming wreck

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  6. 1) long arms of the law
    2) plucked from the jaws of death
    3) imprinted into my memory like a stamp
    4) my heart skipped a beat

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